Friday, October 17, 2014

When an emperor spanks his new filly #SatSpanks

I love this book. It's a departure for me, and yet also not a departure. Pony play is really funny in that it means so many different things to different people despite being such a very specific kind of activity. See what you think of this.
"Girls," the emperor said, "I hope that after you have seen me punish the little filly on my lap, you will not be so slow to obey. I assure you, though, that I can use the lap-quirt gladly on every one of your pretty bottoms before we put you in the filly-wagon for the journey to Maq." 
Now Edera heard whimpers and sobs, as her ladies-in-waiting, surely, obeyed and came to stand behind her to see the way Comnar had opened her secret cleft, covered in the soft fur that Edera sometimes naughtily stroked in front of the mirror, admiring how charming she looked. 
Then without warning the emperor began to whip her right on that bare bottom. It was the most painful thing Edera had ever felt, and she screamed in shame and agony from the first blow. Comnar struck her three times with the little horsewhip on her right bottom-cheek, and then he said, conversationally, "Look at her little rump squirm. I have something for that, too."
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24 comments:

  1. Wait a minute. That's more than eight sentences. I'm calling the cops.

    "9-1-1. What's your emergency?"

    "Tilton. Hot SNIPPET, sure, but too long. Do something!"

    "Are you in a safe place?"

    "Goddammit, yes! Tilton! Over eight sentences! PONY PLAY! Lap-quirts, bare bottoms, filly-wagons, squirming rumps! And over eight sentences!"

    "Ma'am, pony play is a very fine kink, and since the snippet was hot, and you're in a safe place, I'll just remind you that there's a fine for fraudulent use of the 9-1-1 emergency--"


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    1. I believe I've been falsely accused! I count SEVEN! Yup. Seven periods: seven sentences. :)

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    2. I was distracted by that merry-go-round in the sidebar. Good God Tilton-a-Whirl. I wish you would write a little faster and publish a little more frequently.

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  2. I went back and counted, damn you. I'd thought the same as Sheri. (Not exactly the same thoughts as Sheri, obviously. The woman's a nutcase.) And you're quite right there are only seven. (Although I'm not sure there shouldn't be a full-stop after the 'said' in the first line.)

    My, you do have long sentences don't you. I'd manage to have about two lines in Sat Spanks half the time if I played by the rules.

    Nice snippet. I like the idea of a lap-quirt.

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    1. Hmm. Because "Girls" can serve as a complete sentence? ;)

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    2. ""Girls," the Emperor said." can! Possibly. Actually I'm backing down from this one rapidly. Nothing to see here.

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    3. Etta Stark!

      Oh, just hello and all.

      I was gonna say something dramatic, pithy. But the coffee's worn off.

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  3. Wowzers!!! Hot scene.

    The were rules?

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  4. Good grief! What a place to stop!

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  5. This is in my Kindle! I'll be reading it SOON.

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    1. <3 Thanks so much, Cara! I hope you enjoy it!

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  6. I'm laughing so hard at these comments that I spit out the water I'm drinking. This is hot, very hot! I have not read any pony play and now I will have to get this and add it to my kindle. I did go back and count the sentences to verify. Yes, it's only 7. My goodness! False accusations and 911 calls all on one little snippet. Hilarious!

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    2. I hate that Blogger won't let you fix a typo! Fine. Nevermind then.

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  7. I'm not the sentence police, if I were I'd be in jail. Your writing is also so damn HOT.

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  8. Goodness I've been out of the loop too long. I just picked this up. It has delightful historical elements to suit my history buff side as well as the pony play. I have a picture of my wife decked out in her pony gear and when I see it it makes me want to delve into this unique kink. Thank you for the yummy snippet that wet my appetite

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    1. Thanks, Jolynn! I hope you enjoy it! I wasn't sure it was going to do it for me, when I started, but I quickly realized that it REALLY did it for me. :D

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  9. wonderful to see how you brought your voice to pony play, Emily :)

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