Friday, October 4, 2013

Emily's Victorian Bridal Chamber: A few moments later #SatSpanks

My tease last week succeeded beautifully, as far as I could tell, and so, since so many of you were nice enough to call me naughty, I'll give you the next NINE sentences of Emily's Victorian Bridal Chamber (on the theory that I banked one last Saturday). Unfortunately Headmistress knows I like to be spanked, so I can't hope for punishment in recompense of this infraction, I suppose--sigh.

Suddenly my long battle with Mrs. Smith over undressing in her sitting-room came back into my mind. Was I now to be made to show myself to a servant in my own house? I served my honor, just for a moment. 
“No,” I said quietly. 
Polly moved with a quickness I could scarcely believe. She seemed only to be reaching out for my shoulder, but almost immediately I was kneeling next to the bed with my face held down in the bed-clothes—only for a moment, though, because Polly then forced my mouth open firmly but gently, and put a linen towel inside. 
Only then did she speak again: “I’m very sorry, Miss, to ‘ave to do this on your weddin’-day, but you know my orders. Now don’t move, or it’ll be the cane instead of the paddle.” I did not move.
Here's the blurb, once again (buy the book here!):
"This last condition may seem strange, but it is absolutely essential that we have such evidence before we begin to plan for your visit, as the ostensible reason for your presence in Prophettown will be that you have applied to have Mrs. Smith fulfill the role of the Whore of the Nations in the yearly festival of the Angel of Love. We will explain further if we are able to reach an agreement, and you are on your way to Prophettown, but in brief the role of the whore is forbidden to the women of Prophettown, and so men from the outside world, who own submissives, apply (with a large fee, which we will of course waive in your case) for their submissives to play the part, because the owner of the girl who plays the whore is given his own special, highly-coveted, role in the festival. As you have no doubt already guessed, the role of the whore involves polyandrous service; in order to allow you passage to Prophettown, Mrs. Smith will have to be prepared to play it, and I will have to have the same sort of audition-video for her that I have for the other candidates. 
"Please let me know as soon as possible whether you agree to these conditions. Once you do, we can begin to plan your passage, which will have to take place very soon, since the festival occurs at midsummer, less than three weeks from now. 
"I am yours, sincerely, 
"Marcion, Prophet Richards" 
In the 27th book of Explorations, as the story of fantasy-Emily's connection with Prophettown gathers a frightening sort of momentum, the story of Victorian Emily's wedding-night also comes to its crisis point. 
This book of EXPLORATIONS contains fiction elaborating the following sorts of fantasy that you may wish to avoid: Ff, Mf, ageplay, pseudoincest, diaperplay, spanking. It's intended for over-18 audiences who, like me, are interested in exploring the lines between pleasure and pain, dominance and submission, and fantasy and reality. All characters depicted are consenting adults.
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33 comments:

  1. I wouldn't move either. I can hardly imagine a caning on her wedding day, Yikes!

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  2. ooh, a paddling! I'm so excited! yum!

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    1. Polly is really, really strong, it turns out. ;)

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  3. *o my gosh* I do love Polly! She moves quickly, and she knows just what's needed the keep an important day on track.

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    1. And she's really a softie under that ruthless efficiency, too.

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  4. I enjoyed both your snippet and your introduction to it.

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  5. you are such a naughty tease to stop there :D but yes, lovely snippet and intro... I doubt Headmistress will allow you to bank lines :D

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    1. I know I'll pay for it--but that was the fun!

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  6. I'm beginning to then teases are not good for my disposition! But this is a good one and I do want to read more.

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  7. Love Polly's accent. Even nine sentences aren't enough.

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  8. I want to know how one becomes the Whore of Nations!

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    1. Your owner has to send a very special video to Prophettown. . .

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  9. Polly is just following orders after all, wedding day or not. Yikes, what a strict household.

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    1. Mrs. Smith knows when one has to take a firm tone!

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  10. I wouldn't move either if I got threatened with the cane. Nice, Emily:)

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  11. Polly doesn't fool around, does she? Ouch, a paddling on a wedding day, better than a caning but not by much.

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  12. I imagine Polly gets punished if she doesn't follow orders. Nice snippet!

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    1. Oh, yes! Punishments of Mrs. Smith's "strapping young women" can be quite severe!

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  13. Wow, take the paddle, take the paddle!
    Great snippet, Emily!
    :)

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  14. Oh No! on her Wedding day? Poor dear...

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  15. Oh hey Tilton. Finally got in here. Something wasn't working last time I tried. Severe tire damage, do not back up. But I didn't take it personally, either. I just sobbed quietly into my pillow.

    Oh yes, the SNIPPET. Awesome as usual. I can't bring myself to use the "n" word about it, but you know I love you.

    Also, there are "nine sentences," and then there are nine TILTON sentences. My god you do turn a phrase. Gimme summuh dem wordz. I needz dem. OK I'm taking my goofy ass out of here now. But wasn't this a comment for the ages? No? Well, fuck it then.

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    1. Yes. For the ages. It's making me sing that song from Free to be You and Me. . . "Glad to have a friend like you. . ." ;)

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  16. Is that like, some Barney thing? Or Mister Rogers? Or Kermit?

    OK it's not a serious question, truth is, I just want you to watch and see if Google picks up "Barney, Mister Rogers, and Kermit" along with "Tilton, Ff, Mf, ageplay, pseudoincest, diaperplay, spanking." Sort of an experiment, with your blog as a Petri dish.

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    1. Well, this is kind of amazing, because it appears we've found the limits of our absurdly extensive points of contact. Unless you're totally shining me on, and "Free to be You and Me" was actually as important to your childhood as it was to mine. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_to_Be..._You_and_Me

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  17. I love the linen in her mouth to muffle her cries. This paddling will be a doozy no doubt. Love the paddle.

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